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Roger Macdivitt .

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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
5/14/2009 6:39:22 PM

Thanks Kathleen,

I appreciate your visit and comments.

This has a VERY deep meaning for me. I had an amazing confirmation of something spiritual and it was very inspiring.

Although this doesn't explain it does contain much truth.

Roger

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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
5/14/2009 10:10:45 PM
Dear Roger, thank you for posting.  Lots of emotions in that one friend.  Beautifully presented I want to say.  Keep writing, you are even getting better.  Don't have a Petrel to post, but some eagles in this slide show:

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Roger Macdivitt .

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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
5/30/2009 4:17:19 PM

Hi everyone,

Here is my latest poem.

This is a little different for me. Even an old man can hopefully be romantic.

Do you agree?

 

The Girl in the bank

(c) Roger Macdivitt 2009

 

He had seen her before.

He had never spoken to her

He felt paralyzed as her eyes met his

She seemed to smile, but no

The smile had a life of its own within her eyes

 

Oh those eyes

Now he felt that he understood The Mona Lisa

He had never seen such eyes

So bright, so clear, so alive

In all of his life he had never felt this way

 

He had heard of limpid pools

He had seen the clarity of a baby’s eyes

But never before had he seen such purity, such fire, such mystery and promise

He was sure that her eyes were the very portal to her soul

Through that portal he could reach her consciousness

 

She was slight of frame and that’s what surprised him

He had always been attracted to blousier, more obvious charms

She glanced upwards and entered his own personal space

Nobody did that

He was rendered dumb, unlike him, totally lost for words.

 

“Place your card in the machine,” she said

He obeyed without question

Her voice, like music, in his ears

“Enter your pin please,” she said

“Pin?, Pin?, Pin? Oh no”

 

Fear rose inside of him

Her music robbed him of all recall

“Pin?” he mumbled

“Oh yes”

Had he really spoken to her?

 

Now she smiled, wonderfully, beautifully

He melted

He felt a cry at the back of his throat

He acted automatically and punched in his pin

She took his cash and counted it

 

“Please press enter” she said

He did as she asked, not even noticing the keys

“ Three hundred?” she enquired, smiling again

“I, I, I think so, yes” he stuttered

“I’ll give you a receipt”, she said

 

His finger acknowledged automatically

He watched in awe as she played with the printer

Her hands were so lovely

He longed to hold them but they were out of reach

Out of bounds, behind glass

 

She smiled again as she slid the slip through the screen

He took it, feeling foolish that he was in wonder that she had handled it

He would preserve this

It was no ordinary receipt

She flicked a curl from her eye

 

“Anything else?” she enquired

“Yes”, his mouth replied

“Oh yes! So much more” his mind said

She looked at him, waiting

He became aware that she was looking him over

 

He blushed but didn’t speak

The curl fell back across her eye

Sweeping it aside she said,

“What can I help you with?”

“Euros, I need Euros”

 

“Yes sir, Euros?. How many?”

“Eighteen hundred please” he said, gaining confidence

“I’m afraid that you will have to pre-order that amount

“Oh, but I go away on Wednesday”, he said

“When can I get them?” he asked

 

Her beauty seeped into his heart

“I’m going to Paris”, he said

“Oh you are so lucky, it’s so romantic”

“Mmmmm,” he simpered

“ We can get those for tomorrow, is that ok”

 

“Perfect” and she was

Her clothes were smart and crisp, but oh so feminine

He remembered no more of their conversation

He remembered the glances

“Have you never been?”, he asked

 

“No, but my boyfriend has promised that we’ll go one day.”

One word pierced his heart

Boyfriend?, Did she say boyfriend?

Of course, he thought

She would have a boyfriend

 

Now she seemed even farther away

“It’ll never happen. He’s too taken with his sport”

“Well he’s a fool then, Oh, sorry”

He had said it now

He couldn’t believe that he had said it

 

“I would take you on Wednesday, but, .......”

“I’m sorry too. I’m working, but I would love to talk about Paris”

Now he was putty, no, he was dissolving like glue

He slipped and slithered and blushed and then asked

His heart somersaulted

 

“ I could buy you lunch?”

“When?”

“Today”

“O.k.”, she said

Now he wanted to shout, to jump to sing

 

Instead, he said “What time?”

“One o’clock, that’s when I finish”, she said

“I’ll be here”, he replied

“Thank you Sir”, she said cheekily

Did she have any idea what she was doing to him?

 

He knew that she did

He liked it

As he left in a dream he heard her say

“He’s very sweet, I never thought he’d ask”

Tears filled his eyes

 

All of this was three years ago

He looked down at her head on the pillow

A curl was across her eye

She smiled and pushed it away

He melted again

 

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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
5/30/2009 4:22:30 PM

WOW it was fantastic! Like a story! Thank you, Roger for being a human being!!

We only live once and only pass people once in this lifetime, lucky if we get to see the same clerk often enough to recall mutual acquaintance and get to a date or relationship.

That was one of your most riveting and human-beingish works!

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