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Amanda Martin-Shaver

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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
4/7/2009 7:36:24 PM
Hello Roger,

Just popping back
in as I see you have two new poems
since my last visit.

I enjoyed reading Britain's Crowded Isles

I have never been to GB or Pommie Land as we 'Down
Unders' affectionately refer to England or the English,
(People Of Mother England).
  Great Britain is steeped in
history as she has been one of the early countries to be populated
, so I can well imagine there would 'be no stone
left unturned'


Yes is it quite a shame that in many cases, common
courtesy has died, I still enjoy the door being opened for
me and just general manners men give to women, although
I will step up and open the door for men too when I am
there first or I see they have arms loaded, or something
that makes opening the door difficult
- baby pushchair etc..

Until next time


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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
4/10/2009 10:00:15 AM

This came as inspiration in two minutes and late one night before Easter.

I don't understand how or where this came from but I found that I had tears in my eyes when I finished.

I had to share

 

His promise

(c) Roger Macdivitt 2009-04-10

 

Ink flows from my pen

Like blood from his side

My nib is sharp

But not as sharp as the thorns

My loneliness is real but fleeting

His? Total separation

The words on my lips transfer to paper

On His, words, transported to The Father

The lateness of the hour dims and stings my eyes

His, closed and blind – rolling back inside his head

A heavy day indeed

No comparison

I prepare for sleep

He, prepares to die

Tomorrow? I dream of good things to come

His tomorrow? A promise kept

Amen

 

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Amanda Martin-Shaver

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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
4/10/2009 1:21:44 PM
Hello Roger,

Oh wow...That is very powerful and a wonderful revelation
to you.
I believe this is a personal message to you from the Holy
Spirit and perhaps an answer to a silent prayer you did or questions you were wondering about - even if you did not
actually formulate the question in your mind but was kinda
there - out of reach due to not being able to word your
prayer or really think about Jesus cruxifiction. (I hope I am making sense)

I remember a powerful revelation to me and I know it will
stay with me for the rest of my life.  To me revelation is -
answered prayer and total understanding and compehension
to my prayer and question.  Mine was answered so much
more than I had even asked and I have been in total awe
and felt so important and totally loved.


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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
4/10/2009 1:34:48 PM

Hi Roger,

I can relate to the "Common Cold"...but it was a late recognition...my father NEVER got sick or NEVER let people see if he was sick, he wouldn't slug around milking his illness for sympathy...

On the other hand, my husband acts like a giant 4-year-old, sitting in the living room, wrapped head to toe in a thick blanket, sniffling, with all the accessories on his table, tissues, pills, a hot drink, and generally just being a centrally-located snuffling attention-getting germ, and I do say that in the nicest way possible!  I also found out his brother does the same thing at his house!  What's the REAL symptom?  An overly-doting mother who raised them with aspirin crushed in jelly sandwiches or stirred into heavily sugared tea!  THE MOM-IN-LAW ruined them!!

THANKS for sharing your poetry, writing is something we hope people like, in such a personal way, like nothing else that can make us hold our breath and hope no one says "What IS it?"

My husband also says poetry is a waste of paper, why not just say what we mean in ONE LINE?  That's coming from a person who has TONS of music albums, and I reminded him that music IS poetry BEFORE it's set to music.  Oh, yeah!!  If he wasn't such a nice guy, he'd really get on my nerves...LoL.

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Re: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
4/10/2009 1:53:49 PM

Amanda,

Yes, I think that you may be right.

It is humbling but also exciting.

Thank you for reading and posting.

Roger

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