That is kind of you to say... the headline might need tweaking...maybe even a lot of tweaking...lol as said, I am not a ad copy person.
From the letter example that you received I would say the issue is not so much shyness, but one of people not being active. So to me the question becomes and it is an ever ending issue..how to persuade people to be more active so that they can nominate themselves and that is something that with time, interest and more interactions being done, will answer itself.
This was just a quick thing I did and ...did I mention I am not an ad copy person?
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