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Pauline Raina

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Re: Troubled Souls
8/15/2008 1:14:08 PM

Hello Michael,

This is surely one of your best. I am so glad to see you here still with us, and pray that never again you feel the need to go. You have far to many who are happy to have you here and be blessed with your talent.

Here is something I wrote earlier this year with similar people in mind. Hope you like it.

 

MAKING A DIFFERENCE

 

Why do we let our minds

Dwell on the rot,

That does us no good,

But brings us to naught.

 

If we look only for evil,

Sure evil we’ll find,

Does that mean

Good doesn’t exist?

Or are we blind?

 

Instead if we see

The wellness in things

Appreciate the good

In other human beings,

 

The negative though there,

We help them through that

Not by criticizing or abusing

But through love we impact,

 

Let love reign supreme

In your heart and your mind,

 If you really want to

make a difference

With the passing of time!

copyright2007PaulineRaina

 

Blessings always to you my friend.

Pauline

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Dimitra Bravou

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Re: Troubled Souls
8/15/2008 2:38:56 PM
Hi Michael,


Thank you for inviting me to read your new wonderful poem. It's so real! If we all can change somehow for the better, maybe more people change their bad mood and become friendlier and happier.


Dimitra


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Re: Troubled Souls
8/15/2008 3:35:27 PM

Wow, Michael great poem.  Espcecially, for those people who have been hurt by others.  Keep it up and well done.

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Luis Miguel Goitizolo

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Re: Troubled Souls
8/15/2008 4:00:23 PM

Hello Michael,

Your poem is very deep, very heartfelt, strangely beautiful; it has touched my heart at the core. I consider you an achieved, most sensitive poet.

Thank you,

Luis Miguel Goitizolo



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"Choose a job you love and you will not have to work a day in your life" (Confucius)

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Re: Troubled Souls
8/15/2008 6:08:02 PM

Hi Michael,

A very impressive poem. It covered your travails in the recent past and explained in a wonderful way how you overcame the bad with good.

I've always said that in most cases good comes out of bad experiences. It's just a question of the right attitude.

Shalom,

Peter

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