Hello Nick,
What a great story.
I love your writing because to truly great writer you have to be able to make the person reading your story feel like they are a part of it, that they can actually see, feel what you are saying and feeling as if they are there.
That is what we call Passion, When your words can touch someone then you are the teacher teaching others.
Let me share with you this,I help the elderly out on ocassion,
And I like to take them out side to look at things and just be out side.as I watch them or just sit with them,I see how they look around they sometimes just sit there and watch as things go on around them or sometimes they share there stories with me, there memories of the past.
But I watch them look at things in bewilderment.It seems like they are looking at things for the first time,There eyes light up at watching whatever they are looking at.
Once I was watching a man watch a squirrrel, he was in such amazement,he sat there for hours watching this squirrel carry nuts up a tree, the expression on this mans face was something I will never forget.
Our lessons sometimes are for us to stop and appreciate what God has put in front of us,but because everyone is in such a rush people tend to forget and do not stop and even really see what is in front of them. anyways you continue to write your stories as they are wonderful, things in stories if you actually re read then back to your self its like talking and telling you a message, be still, think, hear what you write.
Apply things to help others like you help by writing your planting seeds.
Your an amazing man,apply the same beauty you write about and apply it to your networking,believe Nick.
Kathy Hamilton/simikathy.com