i have to say home 1 good luck

I prefer Home 2, Ruby.  I liked it because it was easier to understand.

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Hi Rudy,

After reviewing each one my option is after surfing so ,many of the same sort of web page layouts and no self designing included tends to bore me, maybe you could create the text link menu as Icons or size the text to match the banner width just my option ,,,,it may help it stand out tad more then the rest of the standard web page sites . Gods Speed my friend :-) Lee

Hi Ruby,

I took a look at your site and would say it's between 1 and 3.
2 is definitely out.
I would say #1 wins.
#3 has too many "whens" and didn't hook me as well as #1. I wouldn't have read far enough to note that the proofreading missed a few mistakes, except that I was evaluating the copy.
#1 gave me what I want to know in the first four or five lines.
The only suggestion for improvement..and perhaps another market study would be to change the font and color and size of the opening line.
Make it Tahoma, red, 14pt.
Marketing pros have said that works best to grab the readers eyes long enough to make them read on.

Hope this helps,
Tim

Tim and everyone,

Thank you so much.  And Yes, your responses do help very much.  Sometimes, an actual marketing response is better than past experience and text book knowledge.  Especially when I create more than one version. The market changes with the people also, so I won't make any changes until I have a greater poll response. 

Thanks again for all your time and effort.  Keep those responses coming!

Take Care and God Bless!

Ruby