Hi Linda and Peter,
The flower in the upper RH corner got my attention. I like it. I also agree with a comment by (Dave?) that mentioned droplets of water on the petals. That would be a good look.
Just a couple of other comments:
I think the green tabs on the LHS are too numerous. By the time I finished reading them all I felt spoiled by choice.
Also, that lovely little testimonial where there is a picture of Peter mixing his concoctions... to me it comes from the heart of a loved one and might work better if there was a small cameo pic of L nearby.
Just my 2c worth.
Gary
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