Hi Linda,
The very first thing that caught my eye was the title and the flower at the top. It looks very refreshing and fresh - I think the only thing that could improve the immediate Springtime effect would to have a few water droplets on the petals of the flower.
Right after the initial picture, the fact that something is 100% natural and handmade stands out, and your complete header very nicely frames and draws the eyes to the paragraph on paraffin, toxins, and the benefits of soy.
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Nice.
God bless,
Dave
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