Here we go! The first part of my series on writing effective emails.
"Writing Effective Emails to Improve Your Marketing Response Rates" (Part 1)
Writing effective emails starts with the subject line. Your subject line determines whether the reader opens it immediately, sets it aside for later or simply trashes it.
Subject lines must be believable. For example, I received an email with this subject line, "Glen, $500k In 72 Hours With This Method!" From my perspective as the reader, the subject line is not believable even if it were true! I've never imagined making half a million dollars in 3 days unless it were the lottery.
An important concept that is obviously lost on most marketers sending emails is that they are not writing from the reader's perspective. It is not what their email will do for them, but what it will do for me, the reader! I have seen too many emails with the subject line stating "Join my downline and make money." Sounds good for the sender, it is the sender's downline. In other words, do not use the words "I," "me," "my," "mine" or other words that refer to the sender. Use words referring to the reader such as "you," "your" or "yours."
You have 3 basic choices for writing subject lines. Your first choice is to arouse curiosity in the reader. Secondly, make an announcement, or, finally, tell how the reader benefits from opening and reading your email. Examples of each are:
1. Curiosity - "Are You Ready to Handle More Website Traffic?" 2. Announcement - "Marketers Traffic Vault Gives New Members 10,000 Ad Credits!" 3. Benefit - "Discover the Rapid Mass Traffic Clustering Strategy that Will Increase Your Affiliate Sales."
Another important concept is the subject line should reflect the email content. Deceptive ads may cause the reader to open the email, but probably not finish reading the email. What reader wants to do business with someone who demonstrates so little ethics or regard for the reader? The marketer just branded himself as unethical or even scamster.
Finally, personalize the subject line by using the reader's name.
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