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Roger Macdivitt .

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RE: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
11/4/2009 7:31:23 PM

Branka,

These marbles are very pretty.

I think that they look like little planets.

Roger

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RE: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
11/4/2009 8:10:06 PM
Hi Roger,

I also love the marbles and the prism poem! Actually women DO admire marbles, we just call them beads and wear them around our necks, LOL! All the kids accomplished a great job, even ourselves when we were young, without knowing it, we helped our parents become much more human.
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RE: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
12/6/2009 5:03:01 PM

Here is a poem which came out of a therapy session with a very bitter female client going through divorce.

When I looked at my notes several words rhymed and so the poem was born.

EVERY word in this poem was said by my hypnotherapy client during our three meetings. Each verse line rhymes with the next verse. Only one line is not a question.

For some reason I have to put lines for verse space as it deletes spaces when I post

Don't know the name for this but here it is.

A Question of Divorce

Why me?

What for?

Why now?

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Who'll see?

What law?

Which vow?

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What Fee?

Who saw?

And how?

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Who's she?

A draw?

Allow?

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Guess he?

A whore?

The Cow

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Roger Macdivitt (c)2009

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RE: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
12/6/2009 5:15:04 PM

WOW...I'm glad my divorce has been slow and planned, sort of...no big pains or surprises, nobody's angry or upset, actually nothing's different...the same old snewze except it's soon going to be a separate snew-ze. LOL. Other people can't even pressure us to dislike each other, and sometimes they try.

Roger, to make spaces, I first put my poem in email or gmail or something, with double spaces between paragraphs, then copy and paste into ALP forums.

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RE: My Poetry.... Roger Macdivitt
12/6/2009 5:26:34 PM

Kathleen

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I have typed this in word

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Double spaced each 2 lines likea verse

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And now I’ll try

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Copy and paste

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