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Re: First Hand Knowledge ( Poetry )
12/7/2007 1:17:16 AM
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Re: First Hand Knowledge ( Poetry )
12/22/2007 4:11:03 PM

Hi Michael,

Your very well written poetry gives me mixed thoughts on this one.  As others have commented, it's often in the perception of the reader.

I read this more like a direct message than a poem.  Someone trying to say "Thank you, sorry, good bye, don't be afraid, and I am afraid" all in one.

Poetry is often a great way to face up to difficulties and often the catalyst for the best poetry written.

When I read this type of poetry, it makes me pray for you that you find a different catalyst for your inspiration.  I am sure you daily wish the same.

All the same, your poetry is a great inspiration to many people here and shows that hiding from life is not an answer either.

Wishing you a very happy Christmas and improved health.

Best Regards

Kay 

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Re: First Hand Knowledge ( Poetry )
12/26/2007 1:49:14 AM
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