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Michael Derowin

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WOW Is This Poem True???
10/31/2007 11:52:07 PM

             Is This Like Someone You Know
 

When you have everything you want in life some

people do not think they are worthy of this,

Never looking at the work done to earn what

they have received to have a life full of bliss.

 

They need to look at what is in front of them

instead of the negative garbage left behind,

Looking at what is really happening to them

moving forward by being honest and kind.

 

Receiving everything they have worked for and

earned thru all of their hard long hours of hard work,

Not feeling adequate for the rewards being handed back

to them instead of accepting the gains as a perk.

 

Wear an honest and true smile for what you have

done not a forced one just like a Circus clown,

Being proud of what you have helped accomplish

and so take a bow and wear your well earned crown.

 

Take a look at how people look up to you for

your experience, knowledge and sound advice,

Not always receiving in return what was thought

of being given what you thought a good price.

 

Getting back what you have contributed with the

time, emotions and money that has been spent,

These are the luckiest people with all the friends that

have been made along the way with the time that went.

 

Having everything already put in place with nothing

to do is not what you seek as you would feel so blue,

What you need is something of a challenge which

will make you work hard and tell all that is true.

 

Spread the word of the work you have helped so hard

with to get it done so the people with you become a unit of one,

Just be thankful what happens with the work that

has been completed with the work everyone has done.

 

Now to add all the extras that will make it really get

going with all the free products and the way it is seen,

Start to think now to what has gone wrong before

with all in the past and the way it has always been.

 

Time to start counting your Blessings for what you

have received in this Journey along the way,

Just listen to your instincts of what you need to do now

but also to those with knowledge and what they say.

 

These are the happiest people that have

been Blessed with all that is needed to know,

Spend time with them and their friends while you

get to know everything needed to help you grow.

 

 

Written by,

 

Michael Derowin

Copyright2007

 


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Dimitra Bravou

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Re: WOW Is This Poem True???
11/1/2007 2:42:23 AM

Thank you Michael for sharing your thoughts with us.


Keep doing your good working.


Warm regards,


Dimitra

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Pauline Raina

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Re: WOW Is This Poem True???
11/1/2007 4:45:43 AM
Thank you Michael,

for yet another great poem. So very true.

great read, look forward to coming back to see some more of your work.

Many blessings

Pauline R


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Trina Sonnenberg

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Re: WOW Is This Poem True???
11/1/2007 6:54:30 AM
Beautiful!
Trina L.C. Sonnenberg Freelance Commercial Writer TLC Promotions & The Trii-Zine Ezine ISSN 1555-2276 http://www.tlcpromotions.net http://trii-zine.com http://FAA.tlcpromotions.net
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Judy Smith

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Re: WOW Is This Poem True???
11/1/2007 6:59:47 AM

How true, Michael.  That is beautiful and yes, I am fortunate enough to know people who fill that role.

Thanks for your true gift and for sharing it with us!!

Judy

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