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Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart
11/17/2007 4:25:53 PM
Hi Sarah,
  I'm a little late getting in here, but at my age I'm slow at everything.  Whoops, got to change my pants again.  I knew I should have started sooner.  Oh, well, that was a heartfelt poem and one filled with love.  I enjoyed it very much.

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Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart
11/19/2007 2:33:41 PM
Mike,

Thank you for coming by.

No one is late here.

You are as old as you feel, young man!

I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.



Blessings,

Sarah
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Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart
4/5/2008 2:07:41 AM

Hi Sarah:

The realism of life between a father and daughter’s relationship makes this poetry relatable to all.  The manner of brilliance in writing conversational-way poetry is quite ingenious.

Joy and sorrow are sentiments perceived from within. Reminiscing fun-fulfilled memories manifested a sense of joy; hence, suffering is accountable for one’s endurance of miserable sorrow.

Just happened to glance at the time…wow…it is now 2:45 a.m.  Just learned the bed had been silently calling, though never hearing and now it is time to get some zzzzz’s.

Your friend,

Babette  :)



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Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart
4/9/2008 5:34:57 AM
Hello Babette,

Thank you for your comments. I'm sorry I took a while to respond. I'm still trying to catch up with myself!

The relationship between my Daddy and I was and continues to be very special. We still connect and I believe it was he who invited me to write this poem, as a message to help others in their sorrow.

I wrote the poem in a conversational way because that is what happened. We had that conversation at the time of his passing. It was not, of course, in poetic form.

I felt inspired to recount the moment, as a help to others, and poetic form seemed to be a stronger and prettier way of presenting the message.

Angel cuddles,

Sarah


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