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Re: Look What Goes Around
8/9/2007 11:34:02 PM

Oh Dearest Joe,

If my ancestor Vuk Karadzic stand up from his death, he wouldn`t be so delighted with your poetry in Serbian/Croatian languge as I am.

BUT, WHAT LINGUISTIC`s REFORMATORS KNOW ABOUT LOVE?

 

Thank you for kind words about my forum.

A little swparrows worlds wide know who is the biggest inspiration this forum owner!

 

 

Joe - bless you!

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Re: Look What Goes Around
8/10/2007 7:06:19 AM

Hi Joe, Branka et all!!

Joe I am MONSTROUSLY IMPRESSED!!!!!!  I have not a clue what it says, but I am impressed.

Branka, you have it SO right - Joe is delighting the little sparrows all over the world!!!!

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Re: Look What Goes Around
8/10/2007 7:53:12 AM

Yes Judy - What goes around Birdessentials - comes around Birdessentials:

              SPARROWS chirping about Joe,

              Me - with parrot`s behavior - just repeating:

        Judy - I admire you!

 

 

or

WHAT GOES AROUND BIRDESSENTIALS COMES AROUND BIRDESSENTIALS.

 

SO....

 

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Re: Look What Goes Around
8/11/2007 7:36:01 PM
Branka and Judy,

Since you liked my poetry, I wrote this one just for this forum.  I hope it expresses well the title "Look What Goes Around".  I took this meaning as when one thing affects another, other things will be affected in a great big cycle of events.  Just as Branka does here by praising others, others have gone off to praise others and the circle leads back here to give praises to Branka.  Then it all starts again.  :)  Okay, here is an unrefined poem...

First in as best as I can Croatian...........


Obličje što odlazi okolo.

sunce ruža jutrošnji.
stanje poklon preko moj Windows.
Ptica preterit od be cvrkut njihov sladak glazba.
Sam bio koristan našto JA awoke.
Moj tijelo odgovaranje sa waking rastezanje.
sjaj svile u mojem pokazivač je koji ublažuje.
zrcalo saviti sreća.
Moj prohodati je energizing.
Svatko pozdraviti mene sa smiješak.
JA pila mrk pogled okret naopačke.
radost je postaviti svugdje.
Moj srce ispunjen gore sa dobrota.
Čak sam zaustavljen to miris cvijet.
Sunset je apsolutno lijep! naročit zvijezda trepet pravedan za mene.
Moj uzglavlje je na taj način mekan i svjež.
Kao JA preneseno od to san ,
JA saviti na razlog za ovaj dobar dan.
JA misliti Ja ću imati drugi laku noć od san.

Branka, I really do not have a good way to check translation.


Now in English.....

Look what goes around...

The sun rose this morning.
The light gifted through my window.
Birds were chirping their sweet music.
I was gracious when I awoke.
My body responded with a waking stretch.
The water in my shower was soothing.
The mirror reflected happiness.
My walk was energizing.
Everyone greeted me with a smile.
I saw frowns turn upside down.
cheerfulness was found everywhere.
My heart filled up with goodness.
I even stopped to smell the flowers.
The sunset was absolutely beautiful!
A special star twinkled just for me.
My pillow was so soft and cool.
As I drifted off to sleep,
I reflected upon the reason for this good day.
I think I'll have another good night of sleep.

Copyright 2007 Joe Downing D7


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Thank you Branka!!!!

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Re: Look What Goes Around
8/11/2007 8:10:37 PM
Im impressed Joe , the translastions are so encouraging.  Can you tanslate this for me? its in Chinese traditional song. Thank you Joe.
Nan Er Dang Zi Qiang

Ao qi mian dui dui wan zhong lang Re xue xiang na hong ri guang Dan shi tie da Gu ru jing gang Xiong jin bai qian zhang Yan guang wan li chang Wo fen fa tu qiang Zuo hao han Zuo ge hao han zi Mei tian yao zi qiang Re xue nan er han Bi tai yang geng guang Rang hai tian wei wo ju neng liang Qu kai tian pi di Wei wo li xiang qu chuang Kan bi bo gao zhuang You kan bi kong guang huo jie qi yang Wo shi nan er dang zi qiang Ang bu ting xiang da jia zuo dong liang Zuo hao han Yong wo bai dian re Yao chu qian fen guang Zuo ge hao han zi Re xue re chang re Bi tai yang geng guang
  Nan Er Dang Zi Qiang- name of the song.  Hi Branka so nice to see everyone encouraging you.  Much Love. Thomas
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