Hi Kathy,
I have had a look and I like the simplicity with which you have laid out your page. Works every time.
I would however prefer to see more 'feminine' colours as it's tupperware. I find the red/green/black/blue/cyan all a bit overpowering and masculine. Generally two to three colours is enough.
Maybe a Pink/Blue/Purple would fit the colour schemes of the summer offers a little better and appear more relaxed, or fresh colours like cyan/orange.
Also, the special offer is now out of date but I know they are hard to keep up with! Time goes tooooo quickly.....
Only other suggestion I would make is to put a few line spaces between the text to break up the block.
What you have written in great! Love the layout!
Oh, one last look and I realised you have a list in the middle. Maybe if it was 'listed' it would catch the eye better.
Hope this is of help, certainly not any criticism meant.
Best Wishes Kay Reeve - Blue Swan
P.S. You can also post a link to your forum from mine ;-)
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