Hi Kathy C.!
I noticed one thing right off the bat that is a marketing no no.
Don't open your web page with "Welcome to my website".
I would recommend that you delete the phrase section "
WELCOME to my site.
Come on in take your shoes off and stay awhile. Have a glass of soda on me."
Leave the rest intact. And insert in place of the message above a call to action such as " Let Me Show You The New Tupperware Line For 2007 " (no quotation marks).
Then I would move up the banner for "start your online party today!" to be right accoss from the text:
Start a Online Party Today - you can EARN FREE TUPPERWARE ( Link to the right)
Lastly, I would change the wording "Link to the right" with "Click on the banner to the right for more details".
Thanks for submitting your question, Kathy. I hope these changes help your web presence. Let us know how it goes... Marc.
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