HI! Sara : my name is Shirley Martin. I had a look at your website I was very in pressed with the home page and I liked the idea you had in getting information form people. I'm new at marketing online and my website I still think it missing something . so I was wondering if you could give me some feed back on what you thought of it and if you like it could you send it to 10 friends whom you think would be interested in it thank you. You can email me back your responce at shirleymartin50@hotmail.com thank You for I don't know where in adlandpro to find your feedback. Cheers, Shirley Martin

Hi Shirley ( here is my response) first of all way to go on being an individual :) here are my suggestions : 1 change the title comment to RythymicImpressions By Shirley Martin ( capital I in the title ? ) 2 the green font is hard to read so a medium blue or something close would look good I think. 3 change the song payment button to read buy now 4 fix the buy now links on the about the product page as they don't link to anywhere 5 fix the spelling errors :) in word or whatever then repaste the text into the web page 6 put you pics on your biography page and get rid of the pics page until you are on tour :) 7 align all the text on your pages to the left as it will look more professional 8 on your home page change the link one & two to say FREE sample songs 9 your bio page is too short , what state or province you live in with a little more of who you really are (what style of poetry , dogs you like, awards you've won ....that sort of thing) and it should say autobiography at the top as you wrote it right :) OR if you have a manager like a parent maybe put their name at the bottom .......... also need to fix the spelling there too ! 10 keep being yourself and let me know when it is updated so that I can see it again Sara opportunities in technology at http://www.fhtmus.com/successbychoice

Your site is very interesting.

Thank you Ed. Looking forward to networking together ! Sara

You always seem to be there when I am trying to learn about adland pro.Still not sure what to do and really need someone to talk to person to person.Need to be discrete about sending money .I know you can give me good advice on how to manage accounts and how to use the computer.You seemed to be some one who I can trust and you can trust me too.Just help me to get on the right tract Please.Your friend at adlandpro. roland c chilton 336-789-2303