Thank you Gary for your opinion. My point was that I was not getting a feed back from all the different people that were given the web site URL address. I thought that the first page was rather technical and boring for prospects to view the rest of the site. Mind you this is my own opinion, I am not an expert by any means. If you got into my DEMO room this is what you would see- http://www.hotconference.org/manager/edmatechuk Thanks again and best wishes, Ed

Hi Linda I am sorry to learn that you could not open my URL website. Apparently, Gary Simpson was able to view it without any problems and it loads for me with my Internet Explorer browser. My web site is hosted by- http://4mybizz.mykioskhosting.com Thanks again, Ed http://www.4yourchoice.com

I was able to access it as well with no problem on two browsers.

Hi Ed, I was also able to view your site. It looked like a proffesional site to me and I liked the microphones. When I first checked it out I wasn't sure what it was about but this time I read a little more. Maybe it is just the marketing of it that isn't getting you any anywhere. But also if Linda and Peter can't find it there are probably others who can't. Martha

Hi Ed First of all you have o good looking website. I would start by writing a new headline a one that shows the biggest benefit your site has to offer! And you could try writing longer salescopy with more details of what you have to offer, (lots of benefits, now you only have features). You have alot of link in you're menu, you might try rewriting the link-names so people know what they can excpect when clicking on them! You can also try fewer links if you like! One more thing! Build a opt-in form and place it in the first fold of your main page with a compelling offer (newsletter, helpful information etc.) That will help you contact your visitors by email later on! Just give it a try, I'll think you will see bigger success them! Sincerely Joakim Lax