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11/21/2008 3:36:08 AM

To all my Mississauga and Brampton brothers and sisters, I will be featured in the magazine 24 Hours for my work in breast cancer awareness and Movember in November for prostate cancer which is why I grew the mustache. It will be out Tuesday Dec 2 so in the meantime enjoy my new creation - God Bless !


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Her soft round face is heavily painted,

with thick lips of ruby red

Money was quickly exchanged,

not a word was ever said


Hungry, I found a place to eat,

to try and calm down from a spreading fright

Unnecessary heated words were said,

on this confusing and disturbed night


I unconsciously drive around in circles,

wondering when and where to stop

It must have looked very suspicious,

as I got pulled over by a cop


He cautiously looked in through the window,

And the next moment he offered me a grin

he said “Why not go home”,

I will not mention where you have been


With great hesitation the front door is opened,

and the painted lady is in hand

I slowly walk toward the bedroom,

it is time to make my stand


Looking into my little one’s eye’s,

And holding the painted lady by my side

I could tell by the clinging tears,

That the love of my life had cried


Sitting on the edge of the bed,

I gently handed her the doll

Yelling at her earlier,

I now felt so very small !

 

By Nick Sym

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Branka Babic

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Re: Corrected Mistake
11/21/2008 6:04:08 AM

 

Nick,

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Re: Corrected Mistake
11/21/2008 9:15:16 AM

Beautiful, Nick!

Congratulations on your upcoming Feature.

Sara

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11/21/2008 9:50:33 AM
Hi Brother Nick,

Great job, as always, nice story. This is what I think of you.

Myrna
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Re: Corrected Mistake
11/21/2008 11:09:05 AM
Hello My Dear Branka

Thank you so much for the meaningful card. I am so excited about the article as nobody in the family has ever been in the paper. All my lady friends where I do the groceries were wondering why I grew the mustache and when the article comes out they are taking me to Tim Horton's as I am not a big drinker - LOL


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