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Nick Grimshawe

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Poets Needed
7/21/2008 12:31:11 AM
Hello to my readers,

There seems to be a scarcity in adland, of poets, can you believe. Anyway that's what The Editor of our Community Newsletter says.

Since I'm the new kid on the block at the Community Newsletter, I got the assignment.

Go out and Find Some New Poets!!!! I was told.

Well here I am.

Help me out here.

If you have any suggestions?

Pass this post link on. Everyone needs to know there is a hunt on
for new poets.

No hiding your talent under a bushel basket that's not allowed.

Here's a chance to be in the spot light.

Desperate in Mission
Sleepless  in the Lowermainland,
Lost in helpless land,

Nick



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Re: Poets Needed
7/21/2008 8:19:51 AM

Hi Nick!

I am Mattias, a businessman from Sweden who is working online with advertising.

But I have also written some poetry in my life and here I send you an example of my work.Tell me what you think:

      Ask the Mirror

Mirror mirror there on the wall!  
Tell me who´s the most generous man in the town.
And the mirror told me it wasn`t a man, but
a little boy.

Mirror mirror there on the wall!

Tell me who´s thrown a stone to crush you?

The mirror answered with a broken heart that it was a man
who couldn`t stand the truth.

Sweet sweet little lie, how can you become a truth?
The lie answered me that it has to fool someone
with a cruel tool, to become a truth in all its betrayal.

Wall wall there how can I get over you?
The wall told me that the lack of understanding
will make me a stiff stone on the other side.
But, if necessary, even a stiff stone can make a speech too.

Cruel cruel world of today, when are you gonna
wake up to realize your real needs?
And the world answered me that the human race must
repair the mirrors, break down the walls, and
stop telling lies to become alive again.

A moral poem with a perspective on the life.

Regards,

Mattias

 

 

Mattias Kroon Affiliate Creative Marketer http://moneymaker4554.blogspot.com/
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Re: Poets Needed
7/21/2008 9:26:00 AM
HI Mattias,

Thanks for your response.

I love the poem. Thanks for sharing here.

I will contact you shortly for more information,


Any other poets out there?


Nick


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