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Rose Smith
8/15/2006 11:05:13 AM
Thanks, Carletta
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Rose Smith
8/20/2006 3:08:35 AM
It is remarkable to continually find expertise and guidance such as yours in the Adland community. More useful Information that can be applied any business. Thanks a million.
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8/20/2006 3:08:35 AM
Thank you, Yvonne.
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Linda: Forde

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8/20/2006 7:39:09 PM
Rose, you sound like a wonderful person. You certainly have the found the technique in making your product market much better than I have found mine. I decided to put an ad in adlandpro too about a couple of months back but after 1 hit out of 800 and I am not sure what to do. I certainly don't want to put more money in and get nothing again. Clicks are nothing unless the person is sold. I need more help in getting my product to ther market place. I was wondering if just serfing would help at least for a while. My business is helping others become completely debt free with knowledge as apposed to just foreclosing or eliminting any debt and not knowing what is happening in the process. Our process takes about 7 to 9 months but you are left with the comfort of regaining some of the wealth back that was taken away from you in the business world of commerce through the banking system. I see that you are also a Christian and a good mother. I was wondering if you would take a look at my sight and tell me what you think. I also have a power point presentation and soon a DVD. It is: www.sovereignfree.com blessing, Linda
Debt free remedy specialist, http://moneymastersfreedom.com -- for the US citizens www.copyright-name.com www.educate-yourself.biz www.lhn-inc.com/sovereign/ www.leadgeneratingtools.net/mb/sovereign/report/
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Rose Smith

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8/20/2006 7:39:09 PM
Hi, Linda. Sorry I didn't see your feedback note sooner. I wasn't ignoring you. I went to your site. The layout and color choices are actually quite good. There is an issue though... I think you should break your content up into a few pages then give primary bullet points on your main page and point your users to the full content with a link. For instance, you might try bullet points like: Did you know: -- your bank does not actually lend you MONEY when you buy a house? -- no actual cash changes hands (from your bank to the seller of your home) when you sign a mortgage? ... and so forth. Break the content into digestible bites (a key points in the content) so that people understand the basic truth you're trying to convey at each point. You will find more people will read your text when you have astounded them with "headlines" then substantiated your headlines with the facts. In the same way, be careful when you do your Power Point presentation. Too much text will turn readers away. Keep your bullet points short and sweet with Power Point. You have a terrific niche site here. You should consider adding context ads so that you have another potential income stream. If you don't want lending companies to be listed in the ads, Google (and possibly others) allow you to exclude certain search terms. Hope there was something useful in this. Rose
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