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Michael Derowin

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Doubts of Oneself
6/8/2008 1:24:19 AM

Doubts of Oneself

 

What is the biggest pain and concern of people

these days when they hear other’s say,

Their problem and what are they scared

of when everything is going their way.

 

The thing they are scared of most is becoming

a failure and fraud in everyone’s mind,

They actually know that what is really missing

which no one can seem to find.

 

Everyone looking at what they can not or do not

really wish the things they find to be seen,

All the negativity they hold deep down inside

holding onto a hope that has never been.

 

Too afraid of looking what had gone wrong in the

past to bring them to where they are today,

Problems in their lives started when all these adults

were young and they had forgotten to play.

 

Causing the chaos to start and build as the

aging started with the trouble about to begin,

The anger and guilt building inside for other’s 

because of their own coming from within.

 

Leave all of this in the past so you can push

and leave all the negativity behind,

This is the only way to get what is needed and that

would only be having a peace of mind

 

Now you have received what you have been

asking for which is closure at last,

Having all the answers let’s you forgive and

forget all of the negative past.

 

So turn all of your sour and disgusting

looks that are on your face,

Into a smile of pride as there is no reason

to feel like you are a disgrace.

 

 

Written by,

Michael Derowin

©2008

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Dimitra Bravou

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Re: Doubts of Oneself
6/8/2008 1:29:42 AM
Hi Michael,

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poems with us.

Very well written.

Blessings,


Dimitra

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Michael Derowin

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Re: Doubts of Oneself
6/8/2008 1:49:22 AM

Hi Dimitra,

Thank-you for coming Dimitra, I do enjoy sharing my Poetry with everyone here. You have been a very loyal reader of all my Poetry. For this Dimitra I am proud you have enjoyed my writing.

Blessings

Michael

 

 

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Holly Goodyer

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Re: Doubts of Oneself
6/8/2008 1:57:26 AM

Deares Michael,

You write so beautifully, and touch so many people with your wonderful words of wisdom.

Keep that faith , love and wisdom you have for your fellow man.

You truly are an inspiration to all who are blessed to read your words.

Much Love

Holly

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Re: Doubts of Oneself
6/8/2008 2:04:40 AM

Dear Michael,

Glad to see you and to enjoy again one of your wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing! Only one song came in my mind by reading this. I don't know if I posted it some other time but I'm sure you'll enjoy it! Blessings!

Click on!

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