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Michael Derowin

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A Time To Forget
10/23/2007 7:59:12 PM

 

        Time To Forget

 

It is time to let go of the pain

and anger which is bottled up inside,

Holding you as a prisoner inside your mind

just waiting for you to let it out cutting it wide.

 

Letting it out with just tears is very slow

and lets it rebuild once again to take control,

Releasing your anger by lashing out at everyone

in your life is not being on damage patrol.

 

Hurting your friends and family letting

go of your negativity from your hurtful past,

The damage you may cause may turn against you as

you chase away your support which will always last.

 

Come to your senses before it is too late and speak

with them about what has been going wrong, 

They will help by listening to all your sorrows

and pains which have been going on for so long.

 

This takes a very strong willed person to make this

journey all on by themselves not what they are shown,

Everyone would be amazed if this is how you have

shown them that you have succeeded and have grown.

 

When you have gotten rid of all the negativity

then it is time to go out and hit the town,

Showing everybody how you have moved ahead

and no longer feeling so depressed and down.

 

Walking in the Positive side of your life which

is a very big step forward in your life at last,

Knowing what had to be done to smile while you

forgive so you are able to walk away from your past.

 

 

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Michael Derowin

Copyright2007


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Judy Smith

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Re: A Time To Forget
10/23/2007 8:25:36 PM

Michael,

That is an awesome poem, Michael!!  I hope you will walk away!!I felt your anger mostly your pain!!  Let it go and just keep on writing.  You poetry is amazing!!

Judy

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Re: A Time To Forget
10/23/2007 8:46:23 PM

Michael,

 That was VERY good and so true. I definately liked that one!!!!!!!!!!

Thank You for sharing this with us all. I really like your poetry. I hope to see many more in the future.

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Re: A Time To Forget
10/23/2007 9:04:26 PM
Michael,

One of the hardest things in life is simply walking away from those things that have caused pain. Too often those things rear their heads from time to time and tempt us to return to pain we once had left behind. I truly know how that feels. Your poem reminds me of this very much. Each and every time something returns I need to let it go.

Thank You My Poet Friend :)

Kari
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Donna Zuehl

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Re: A Time To Forget
10/24/2007 12:17:02 AM
Hi Michael, Many of us have that pain to which you refer. You write about letting go of it, which can help us to focus on doing so. DonnaZ
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