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Kari Shinal

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Wonder
9/29/2007 11:29:44 AM

Wonder

While I wander through this life,
And learn all I can learn,
The lessons I have faced this day,
Leave my soul to yearn,

What meaning does this life have,
What plans are there for me?
Do I have a part in this,
Like river mount or tree?

Is this life meant to sling us far,
To our immortal tress,
Or is this life meant to bind us all,
Into happiness?

What meaning does the heart include,
In this great plan divine?
What is my part, when is my day,
When am my love to find?

Or is this life intended,
To bring my love to pass,
To share it with all those in need,
As they wander past?

With hurt and pain, war and gain,
Being the only way
So many know of this life’s meaning,
Surely brings us shame.

This life is meant to shape us,
Into what we soon shall be,
Eternal beings living same as,
We here wish to be.

Without the anger strife and fear,
That this life has to offer,
How can we be sure to survive it here,
Without the need to suffer?

We can’t, we can’t, avoid these things,
It’s life’s lesson to crawl,
And progressing past the stars we see,
Potential lies in all.

Kari Shinal
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Nov. 2006

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Diane Bjorling

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Re: Wonder
9/29/2007 4:12:16 PM
Forgive the lateness of posting here Kari...oops  :-)

You know i read this a few times and all i could do was shake my head in agreement.  I so relate!!

I sometimes feel as though many  of us, whether we admit it or not just keep in the crawling stage....hmmm explains the scuffed knees.....loll

Like our friend who also does poetry, you have this gift to make us feel and learn from.....thank-you

hugs to you

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Dennis Turner

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Re: Wonder
9/29/2007 6:04:08 PM

Wonderfully written Kari!

Best wishes,

Dennis

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Re: Wonder
9/29/2007 10:15:59 PM
Hello Kari,

Thank you sharing your poem.
I agree with the sentence that Diane said -

I sometimes feel as though many of us, whether we admit it or
not just keep in the crawling stage....hmmm explains the scuffed
knees.....

No wonder there is a saying 'if we only knew now,
what we did back then' 


Kind regards
Amanda

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Dimitra Bravou

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Re: Wonder
9/30/2007 4:37:28 AM
Hello Kari,


Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

Very good indeed.


Regards,


Dimitra

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