Hello,
Please don't take this the wrong way, I don't mean to offend you in any way. I just want to make a suggestion on your ad.
Try making your ad more personal as if you were telling your best
friend what a great business you're a part of, and all the
awesome benefits they'll receive from it. This way it feels more
sincere and doesn't sound like a ad.
I have ads made up already that you can use for any business. If you like I could send them to you.
Here's my E-mail: joinwinners@gmail.com I'll be more than
glad to send them to you. No charge. In Subject put (Send Ads)
To your success,
Frank Osorio
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