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Michael Derowin

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Now We're Apart
7/26/2009 10:56:59 PM

Now We’re Apart

 

Now words have been said which

really hurt you deep,

The other not knowing how

much you really weep.

 

Depression gets stronger and

it can not be contained,

I have given up with no

life to be maintained.

 

Feels lately I have been walking

with nobody just all alone,

Leaving an empty feeling and

a heart returning to stone.

 

This is not the time or place

for these feeling to be shown,

They will just destroy the amount

we have/had already grown.

 

 This is headed towards all my

relationships of my past,

Letting it keep going this way our

love has no chance to last.

 

So let us push the negativity where

it belongs and take a chance,

Making it worth gently taking a hold of

each other for the last dance.

 

Written by,

Michael Derowin

©2009-07-18

 


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Dimitra Bravou

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Re: Now We're Apart
7/27/2009 1:08:14 PM
Hi Michael,

Thank you for sharing your new poem.

Love is great as long as it lasts. There's no love to the eternity so we have to enjoy it when we have it. Sorrow leads us nowhere.

Have a nice week,

Dimitra

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Kathleen Vanbeekom

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Re: Now We're Apart
7/27/2009 2:31:46 PM

Hi Michael,

We don't leave a trail to find our way easily out of love, no matter how often we fall into it and get hurt.  The painless trail out of ended love would be a great idea.

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Joyce Parker Hyde

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Re: Now We're Apart
7/28/2009 4:44:11 PM
thank you
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Myrna Ferguson

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Re: Now We're Apart
8/12/2009 9:02:07 AM
Hi Micheal,

I think this fits in here.

Blessings,
Myrna


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