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Dimitra Bravou

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Re: Sleeping Children
9/28/2007 12:02:18 PM
Hello Kari,

I'm very impressed of how some people can use the words to make a poem. I liked your poem very much especially because it is about children and how we can be inspired only by looking at them.

Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

Regards,


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Steven Suchar

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Re: Sleeping Children
9/28/2007 1:01:19 PM
Hi Kari!

^5 to you. :)  Thank you so much for sharing your "gift" with me today!!  I am sure many friends are enjoying it too. lol

Please bring more of your works into our lives okay?

Have a pleasant day...your OREO friend Steven.


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.
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Kari Shinal

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Re: Sleeping Children
9/28/2007 1:16:03 PM
Dimitra,

I to am impressed of other poets here on adland. Each and every one has their own style and people are impressed by different things. The more shared, the more gained.

At Birth

Sometimes I look into my childs eyes,
And see wisdom not seen before,
At their birth there's no surprise,
So many things in store,

Their eyes wide, their hearts new,
No love escapes their sight,
This leads us all to begin anew,
And keep them to us tight,

Remembering of those things in past,
That opens up the gates,
Our own eyes closed to these at last,
The child brings out this state

Kari Shinal
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Kari Shinal

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Re: Sleeping Children
9/28/2007 1:17:13 PM
Steven,
Thanks so much. Indeed these recognitions from friends help be remain encoraged to continue sharing.

Kari
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Re: Sleeping Children
9/28/2007 1:23:53 PM
Kari,

Thank you for the invitation.  I see your poem as a great big HUG!!!

Thank you for the hug of beautiful words and meanings.

Joe

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