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 Topic: A Haiku
 Forum: Acrostic-a form of Poetry
Topic created by: Mattias K.
Started: Jul 22 2008
Replies: 16
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Mattias Kroon (user id: poetrymusic) is offline. Last active: 1/8/2009 4:05:33 PM Mattias Kroon
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A Haiku
Posted: Jul 22 2008 04:21 PM

I thought it was time to try another form here, namely  a Haiku.

A haiku must have a certain syllable-scheme of 5-7-5 in three lines and the content must be about the nature.

             The Eagle is there

              The eagle is there

        Somewhat spying on the ground

             Catch the size of it


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Lydia Fokina (user id: 261150) is offline. Last active: 1/9/2009 2:52:23 AM Lydia Fokina
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Re: A Haiku
Posted: Jul 23 2008 02:54 PM

OK, let’s try this

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I don’t understand exact

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English Syllable, but…

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but it is my attempt in English:

Iris After Rain

Iris After The Rain

 

Iris After Rain

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Isn’t Enough Water ToDay?

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Let’s see Sun Now!

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Best wishes to all,

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Nice to see my friends here,

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Moscow, Lydia

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Mattias Kroon (user id: poetrymusic) is offline. Last active: 1/8/2009 4:05:33 PM Mattias Kroon
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Re: A Haiku
Posted: Jul 23 2008 03:35 PM

Thanks Lydia!

It isn´t so easy the first time, but thanks anyway!

Nice picture!


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Steven Suchar (user id: stevensuchar) is offline. Last active: 1/8/2009 11:53:03 PM Steven Suchar
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Re: A Haiku
Posted: Jul 24 2008 11:29 AM
Hi Mattias!

Okay, here's my next attempt...

Sunshine On The Earth
Dawn And Dusk Are Always There
Bringing Day And Night



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Mattias Kroon (user id: poetrymusic) is offline. Last active: 1/8/2009 4:05:33 PM Mattias Kroon
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Re: A Haiku
Posted: Jul 24 2008 12:36 PM

Excellent Steven!

It´s summertime and it was most suitable!


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