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A Haiku Posted: Jul 22 2008 04:21 PM |
I thought it was time to try another form here, namely a Haiku.
A haiku must have a certain syllable-scheme of 5-7-5 in three lines and the content must be about the nature.
The Eagle is there
The eagle is there
Somewhat spying on the ground
Catch the size of it

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Re: A Haiku Posted: Jul 23 2008 02:54 PM |
OK, let’s try this
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I don’t understand exact
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English Syllable, but…
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but it is my attempt in English:
Iris After Rain

Iris After Rain
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Isn’t Enough Water ToDay?
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Let’s see Sun Now!
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Best wishes to all,
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Nice to see my friends here,
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Moscow, Lydia
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Re: A Haiku Posted: Jul 24 2008 11:29 AM |
Hi Mattias!
Okay, here's my next attempt...
Sunshine On The Earth Dawn And Dusk Are Always There Bringing Day And Night
Have a pleasant day...your OREO friend Steven.
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