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Michael Derowin

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Long Term Commitment ( A Poet's Tale )
2/18/2008 2:20:04 PM

Secrecy

 

Here comes the Sun where we have joined

to become as a single one,

Taking our own secret vows which we

know will not be undone.

 

Until now we have taken an oath to keep this to ourselves

and out of the public eyes,

Even when we know how much on the

inside the other truly cries.

 

At times this causes us to have a whole lot of

emotional and ongoing trust,

Thru this hardship to both of us we become

stronger and prove it is a must.

 

We cry ourselves to sleep scared it will not

happen on any given night,

What we need to believe is what we already

know is coming to the light.

 

Knowing what is right helps us move forward

together like no illusion,

Making everything like it is in disarray and

totally full of confusion.

 

Here is what we do when times are getting

extremely hard and tough,

Join together and help each other along the way

when everything looks very rough.

 

So take each other and give the other

a very big and long hug,

Feeling so safe when holding each other

so close and so ever so snug.

 

As hope is not over as the truth has been

written by those from afar,

Let go of all your fears and tears as you keep

wishing on that faraway star.

 

Written by,

 

Michael Derowin

©2007

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Ana Maria Padurean

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Re: Long Term Commitment ( A Poet's Tale )
2/18/2008 2:45:19 PM
Hello Michael,

Your poems are just beautiful!

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Sorry for leaving you without answer to your last PM, but reading your poem in English I changed my mind about the translation! LOL I think it was just my imagination that made it rather good as it was awful!!! I'll give it a try to make it better, but I'm far than to be a poet, no matter in what language!

With friendship,
Anamaria
PS: the music just fits to your hopes! I feel?!...
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Joelees Wholesale

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Re: Long Term Commitment ( A Poet's Tale )
2/18/2008 2:47:31 PM

Michael,

What a great piece very well written with so much truth & lessons within . Thank you for sharing have a blessed day Gods speed :-) Lee

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Re: Long Term Commitment ( A Poet's Tale )
2/18/2008 3:13:12 PM
Hi Michael,


Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem.



         



Best regards,


Dimitra

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2/18/2008 4:34:48 PM
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