A Simple Poem from the Heart Discussion Topic @ AdlandPro Community

A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 16:05:57 GMT

A Simple Poem from the Heart

Daddy, I don’t want you to suffer,

But Daddy, I don’t want you to go.

Sarah, I won’t be gone, ever,

But my suffering has to go, you know.

Daddy! I love you my Daddy.

My Sarah, I love you too.

Daddy, please don’t ever leave me.

Sarah, that I will never do.

Sarah, it’s almost his time.

We’re all with him; I’ll give you a call.

I’m waiting, waiting; it’s just a matter of time.

Daddy, Daddy, can you hear me call?

Sarah, are you there? Please take my hand.

I’m here Daddy; here’s a cuddle for you Pop.

I’m just about ready to go to the other land.

Daddy, keep me in your heart; don’t ever stop.

Oh Daddy, your angel guides have come.

Don’t worry Daddy; just follow their light.

Here, place your hands in their hands. “Welcome.”

Oh Daddy, you look so peaceful and, like them, so bright.

Daddy, I love you; you’ll always be a smile in my heart.

Sarah, I love you; I’ll always be here for you, your guiding light.

The Angels, take care of Daddy; put the strength back in his heart.

We’ll always be united in angel cuddles, love and light.

By Sarah & Raymond Barton

Angel Cuddles,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 18:29:21 GMT

Hello Sarah,

Thank you for sharing your poem, it is extremely heartfelt and touching......I wish I had had a daddy like yours.........

Created By: 255442

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 20:35:57 GMT

Hello Sarah!

You have callitechnic (artistic) passion too. That I did not know. Let's make thos place a real MASTERS OF ART Corner.

Thank you for this very nice poem. I am expecting to read more.

Ana Maria Padurean sent me a nice song some minutes ago.
Nana Mouscouri, Greek vocalist world famous singer.
Gheorghe Zamfir, The man with the flutes.

The lonely Sheperd

click here or the pic!

HEy don't miss this
Visit this special forum

Georgios

Created By: Genesis

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 21:05:44 GMT

Jo,

Hello again and thanks for your comments and the beautiful graphic.

May the angels watch over us all.

Blessings,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 21:19:52 GMT

Hello Georgios,

Thank you for coming by.

I wasn't sure if my invites had worked.

Thank you for your comments and the wonderful video.

Nana looks like an angel.

The flute music is lovely.

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 21:28:47 GMT

Sarah,

Beautiful Poem! Like Georgios, I can't wait to ead more. As Judy, said, you are off to a great start.

ooohh and I hope you don't mind, I added you to the forum list at my place.

Blessings

Valerie Clavin

------------

Hugs = Priceless

I just Love this, I snitched it from Steven.

Created By: skyline

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Thu, 11 Oct 2007 10:07:35 GMT

Hello Sarah :-)

You're right, the poem is Simple and Beautiful!

Thank you for sharing such an important piece of your heart with us!

With friendship,
Anamaria

Created By: anamaria

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Thu, 11 Oct 2007 20:23:30 GMT

Hello and thanks again, Ana Maria!

A couple of days ago I just sat down and started to write the poem.

It was actually rather an intense moment although the poem is simple.

My little Isabelle was looking at me wondering why I had tears!

Still, she's used to her softy mother crying.

A big Angel Cuddle to you and thank you for letting me share my poem with you.

Love,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Thu, 11 Oct 2007 20:15:52 GMT

Thanks Valerie,

I don't know when the next one will be.

I just suddenly sat down and wrote that poem the other afternoon.

Then I felt the need to share it and voila, my forum began!

Thank you for adding me to your forum list.

I need to make time to find some more friends, I think.

People have found their way here. Was it my invite or by other means?

Not sure if there was a glitch with the invite sending!

Goodnight,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Thu, 01 Nov 2007 18:10:28 GMT

Hi Sarah,

What a BEAUTIFUL POEM. This brought tears to my eyes.

You are so talented :-)

God bless you, Jill

Created By: pro3

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 20:39:28 GMT

Very Sweet Sarah
Thank You

Sincerely,

Heidi Stern

Created By: 287293

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Thu, 11 Oct 2007 20:01:48 GMT

Thank you Heidi,

I hope you come back from time to time as I develop the forum.

Best wishes,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 17 Nov 2007 21:02:46 GMT

Sarah....Sarah! I like your lovely, poignant poem. Like everyone else here, I think you're very talented.

God bless and best wishes, Pat

Created By: 252171

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 17 Nov 2007 21:43:34 GMT

Thank you Pat,

Here's to new worlds being born.

Love & light,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 10 Oct 2007 21:11:48 GMT

Congratulations, Sarah!

I just did my first forum last week. You did a great job and poem is wonderful!!

Oh, and I checked - you are still on my friend's list - if you are missing a lot of friend let me know - that is what my forum is all about!!

Created By: jnsmith

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Thu, 11 Oct 2007 20:08:52 GMT

Hello Judy,

Thanks for coming by and for your praise.

I joined your new forum but I haven't managed to post in it yet.

I will do soon.

My friends list disappeared from the box when I was trying to send out invites to my new forum, but I still have my friends list.

However, it's not a big list so perhaps you could find me some new friends.

I'll pop along to your friends forum soon.

goodnight and angel cuddles,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Fri, 12 Oct 2007 15:28:35 GMT

Created By: tmobil8

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Fri, 12 Oct 2007 15:57:10 GMT

Thank you Thomas, I think! (Hope I don't look like this!!!)

LOL

So, you found me.

I still don't know if people are coming here due to my invite (which may have had a glitch) or via other means!

Thank you for coming by.

Angel Cuddles,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Fri, 12 Oct 2007 16:53:47 GMT

Yes I have found you and no you dont look like that, you look like this in my eyes. oh by the way i had to like many , had to go to your profile and click on your forum to get here. no secrete to those who sneak around. lol
Created By: tmobil8

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 13 Oct 2007 11:30:34 GMT

Well this time I can say thank you, Thomas!

I thought there was a glitch when I tried to send out the invites.

I'll have to try to let people know again.

Thank you for coming back,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Fri, 12 Oct 2007 21:02:56 GMT

Dearest Sarah,

As I promised you early today, I am here ... Reading your so nice, sad and tender poem, I am ensured that coincidences really doesn`t exist ...

An hour ago I received a sad news, that my dear son has lost a person whose family name, color of eyes, the same teeth .... my son took with his birth ... Even though he never gave him opportunity to call him Daddy ... reading your poem ... my sadness came triple in it`s size ...

This October is very often so important in my life ...I was born on 2nd, married with a man that perished this evening due terrible traffic accident on 21st (and today is reverse: 12th ), I was imprisoned and spent my last day together with my husband and son on 30th October ...

O M G!!!!!

Dear Sarah, just: your poem was written to help you when your tears lost their way , and to help me today to understand, billionth time again, that these moments are ... one so ancient and endless source of poetry.

Thank you, dear friend ... I am so glad you started your forum. You are to modest, but I know you have a lot of to share with so wonderful persons here at Adland. If this forum will motivate you in this direction, a lot of people, beside you, will benefit a lot .

Hug you, bless and embrace with love of my soul!

Yours,

Branka

Created By: EloElu

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 13 Oct 2007 11:51:27 GMT

Dear Branka,

I don't know if you will read this message here, but I will contact you outside ALP too.

I'm sorry that you were feeling so sad.

I'm glad that my poem helped you.

I wrote it because I was discussing with someone how to help people cope with bereavement.

The poem just came to me. I stopped what I was doing and scribbled down the words before I lost them.

I was physically 800 miles away from my Daddy when he passed on, but we both shared that experience.

When my sister telephoned late in the evening, to tell me that it was over I had just finished thanking the angel guides for taking care of my Pops.

I said to my sister: "Yes, I know. I was holding his hand."

She replied "You were holding his hand. Of course. I'll call you again tomorrow."

I was helped and comforted by the angels before and after Daddy's passing and I wanted to share that with people as an inspiration to let them know that the angels are there to guide, protect, help and comfort us. We just need to ask.

Bon voyage on your journey of life and let me know how things are going please.

Thank you for making the effort to come by before you left.

Blessings, love & light,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Fri, 19 Oct 2007 16:12:56 GMT

Dear Sarah, Sis - that's beautiful!!! I thought about my brother so much when reading your words. Unfortunately I couldn't be with him as I planned when he had to go and I didn't know then how to get the connection. But I know now he had an angel guiding him and didn't had to go alone. It's a very, very touching and yet comforting poem - thank you so much for sharing it with us here!!!
I'm looking forward to read more from you.
Many hugs, blessings and angel cuddles to you,
Janet

I left the picture this big or the words would have been unreadable.

Created By: anle0305

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 20 Oct 2007 09:19:59 GMT

Janet,

Thank you for your contribution here. This poem works in co-operation with mine so well.

I am glad you took comfort from my poem. I believe that that is why I was inspired to write it, as a comfort.

I was greatly comforted by the experience itself, and I think a poem helped me to express that comfort more than relating the experience in the form of a story.

I hoped to bring comfort by sharing and feel that I was encouraged to do so.

I hope that does not sound pretentious of me. It's not meant to be. I sincerely feel that way.

Thank you for coming here and sharing with us.

Angel cuddles to you, dear sis,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 20 Oct 2007 14:43:15 GMT

What a NICE POEM Sarah!! Thank you so much for inviting me to read it. The love and hope about love and eternal life is very comforting. Thank you for keeping me and my family including my kitty girl Snickers in your prayers. God bless you dear. Pat

Created By: 252171

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 20 Oct 2007 17:08:32 GMT

Dear Pat,

I'm so glad that you came and that you found comfort here.

Snickers is in my prayers.

Blessings,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 03 Nov 2007 17:43:48 GMT

Hi Sarah,

Thank you for a beautiful poem that is truly from the heart. It is a unique gift to be able to write in this way.
A father has such an impact on our lives for good or bad. I am blessed to have had a Dad who did his best to be a good example to me and you.

Sarah you have a beautiful heart! Thank you for sharing this poem with me.

Blessings,

Len

He died for us.

Created By: CedarrockProducts

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 03 Nov 2007 18:33:56 GMT

Dear Len,

I'm glad you accepted my invitation.

Thank you for your kind words.

As they say here, "Je suis émus" (roughly translated as: I'm overcome with emotion).

We now walk in the light of our Dads.

Blessings & Angel cuddles,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 17 Nov 2007 03:53:19 GMT

Hi Sarah, I just read your poem. It is truly lovely. DonnaZ
Created By: DonnaZ

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 17 Nov 2007 20:35:55 GMT

Donna,

Thank you.

Angel cuddles,
Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 17 Nov 2007 22:25:53 GMT

Hi Sarah,
I'm a little late getting in here, but at my age I'm slow at everything. Whoops, got to change my pants again. I knew I should have started sooner. Oh, well, that was a heartfelt poem and one filled with love. I enjoyed it very much.

GOD BLESS YOU

MIKE

Created By: 192260

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Mon, 19 Nov 2007 20:33:41 GMT

Mike,

Thank you for coming by.

No one is late here.

You are as old as you feel, young man!

I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

Blessings,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Sat, 05 Apr 2008 07:07:41 GMT

Hi Sarah:

The realism of life between a father and daughter’s relationship makes this poetry relatable to all. The manner of brilliance in writing conversational-way poetry is quite ingenious.

Joy and sorrow are sentiments perceived from within. Reminiscing fun-fulfilled memories manifested a sense of joy; hence, suffering is accountable for one’s endurance of miserable sorrow.

Just happened to glance at the time…wow…it is now 2:45 a.m. Just learned the bed had been silently calling, though never hearing and now it is time to get some zzzzz’s.

Your friend,

Babette :)

Created By: Heroes

Re: A Simple Poem from the Heart

Wed, 09 Apr 2008 10:34:57 GMT

Hello Babette,

Thank you for your comments. I'm sorry I took a while to respond. I'm still trying to catch up with myself!

The relationship between my Daddy and I was and continues to be very special. We still connect and I believe it was he who invited me to write this poem, as a message to help others in their sorrow.

I wrote the poem in a conversational way because that is what happened. We had that conversation at the time of his passing. It was not, of course, in poetic form.

I felt inspired to recount the moment, as a help to others, and poetic form seemed to be a stronger and prettier way of presenting the message.

Angel cuddles,

Sarah

Created By: sarahp